Updated Narrative

 Updated Narrative

Our story goes over the topic of a Valentines Date gone wrong. The scene is set with a boy sleeping in his messy room, we want to give the effect of this boy being lazy not only with work related things but all parts of life. He then wakes up and noticing how late he is to his first date starts rushing to get ready and leave.

As he gets around his room tripping over obstacles in his way and rushing to find his clothes and wear them, each of these moments are building up anticipation for whats to come next. They also add the comedic value of the opening since all of these scenes will be exaggerated in a humorous way.

As he then rushes outside he notices an unguarded bike, he looks around for an owner and not being able to locate one, in his desperation and frantic rush he gets on the bike and makes a getaway. Then as he remembers he needs flowers as he sees another person who looks like hes going on a date also (as he has flowers in his hand) he decides to zoom past him on the bike and snatch the flowers out of his hand.

When he finally makes it to his dates house he rings the bell and presents her with some flowers, here a twist occurs as instead of the girl coming out to greet him her father/brother appears and as he unknowingly presents who he assumes to be the girl the father/brother slaps the protagonist on the face, this simultaneously will cut to him waking up from a dream as the final twist. It was all a dream he realises as he finds out he was overthinking this whole time and drifts off back to sleep.

This is what we've decided on as its relatable experience for most people with the constant worry of being late to important and momentous occasions and rushing against time.