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After showing the film to our teacher he told us the camerawork was excellent, the angles the shots and composition was good and the comedic affect landed, the music was fitting too. But he had 2 main critiques, first was that we hadn't used any voice overs as this was a convention of our genre, so we will be sure to add this in the final cut as it will also help us with the story telling, secondly he said the ending was not very fitting as it lacked continuity the story "just ends there" there is no reason for the viewer to keep on watching as the story has been completed basically. So we will be taking this advice and changing the part where he wakes up to something else with more suspense and reason for the viewer to want to keep watching